Tuesday, July 28, 2015

Draft of Rhetorical Analysis 
When looking at my draft, there are a few things I want to mention. I integrated a lot of quotes so let me know if it gets confusing or if there are too many quotes. Also I am still deciding if I want to switch paragraph 3 with paragraph1 so the readers can understand the context of the issue before I talk about the credibility of the article. So your views on those will be very helpful. Lastly, my conclusion is short and I can't  decide if there should be more information added to the ending to tie all of the information back to the main idea. Other than that I hope you guys enjoy my paper! 



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  1. A great start! But be sure to change the link to give reviewers access to add comments and not just "view".

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